Final Edit

Evaluation Question II: How effective is the combination of you main product and ancillary texts?

Evaluation Question II: How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary tasks? from aimeelee12

Evaluation Question VI: Evaluation - Prezi

Evaluation Question VI: Construction - PaintNET

Evaluation Question VI: Research - Word

Evaluation Question IV: Planning - CeltX

Evaluation Question III: What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Evaluation Question I: In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

Sound Edit

Review Draft Seven

In this draft, I shortened the synopsis, which has allowed more space for the reviewer credit. I have also made some minor changes to the review, restructuring a few sentences to ensure that it reads as well as possible.

Refined Edit

Poster Draft Three

Following feedback, I decided to integrate digital processes with analog processes in order to create more negative space and a poster that looked more like my original idea.

Magazine Review Draft Six

Following further discussion, I decided to give some elements on the page more space, as some areas were more cramped. I changed the font and colour of the text providing information on the film, as well as shortening the synopsis and editing the footer area again.

Second Rough Cut

In order to cut down my film, I removed extra shots that didn't need cutting to, such as the final scene in which the caretaker and Hannah remain in the wide shot at the beginning. I also cut shots that didn't move the narrative forward, such as the part in food tech in which Hannah grabs a chopping board and uses the knife, as her movement is gentle and doesn't build much tension. There are scenes that I cut out too, as I ran into an issue filming the broom cupboard scene with Hannah, because she wasn't able to shut it fully with the broom in the way. This meant it didn't cut to the next scene as effectively and so I got rid of it all together. The second cut of the film is now just over six and a half minutes, and so some last refinements are still necessary to make it shorter.