Having received feedback from my teacher, we reached the agreement that the synopsis should be shortened and that further examples of technical codes within the film should be mentioned. I have edited the review to accommodate this. I have also added an image, and made slight changes to the colouring on the credits section at the bottom. Furthermore, I also changed the page number area of the page, to make it look as if it is more integrated into the rest of the page.
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