Overall, my media literate peers gave positive feedback in the responses to my paper based survey. They all discussed the familiarity in the subject matter, the problem, issues and themes.
I am happy with the familiar rituals used within the synopses, in that it is home time for the girl, and this can be related to by many.
Moreover, issues and themes were clear in portraying a meaning, and the problem was said to be the heart of the film, although I'd like to introduce the idea of internal problems as well as external. For example, the girl faces the external problem of being isolated by her parent figures, although she may encounter more personal issues, such as having the knowledge and understanding to care for herself, and the journey she will partake in to gain a greater independence and responsibility throughout the narrative.
As a result of this, I may need to raise the stakes to ensure the audience retention is as high as possible.
To conclude, my most popular and effective synopsis is the third option, and so it is clear to me that this might be the best one to continue redrafting.
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